Live Your Life! (Edit: Newly rendered video)

EDIT:
Ok, so I rendered this and it's better to look at lol, but I didn't go back and fix up any animation, which is why it's not getting it's own post., but if you care to take a look, here it is:
Newly rendered:

I took out the original video, but the text below is the same from the original post.

This is what I've been working on in After Effects.  Now that's it's rendered I'm seeing issues hidden in the lag of slow computer processor, but I'm proud of it any way~
Maybe one day with a better computer, and more animation experience I'll finish the song and polish what I got so far.

Btw, this song is "live your life" by Yuna.  She is a great Artist from Malaysia

This sunday I'll have another test animation to post!

See ya around~